(Untitled Haiku)

orange sky
last rays of sun
take my beatitude away

- Haiku, 8/10/2004

(Original Picture and Haiku © to me)

 

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15 Comments on “(Untitled Haiku)”

  1. dinsan says:

    good one C to me ? hm ?

  2. ruhi says:

    @Ankur, Thanks :)

    @Diinsan, Copyrighted to me. :P

  3. dinsan says:

    Did you take this one ? uhmmm

  4. bApHoMEt says:

    autumn fanged trees
    sky, like embers
    reminds me of your eyes

  5. Yaar, where did ya get orange sky from to match your haiku?How did ya search? and if ya took, where?

  6. ruhi says:

    @Poonam, Yes, I clicked it yesterday. The Haiku had been written in 2004 though.

    @Bap- That was stunning!

    Haiku # 2
    ______________

    in your eye
    the silvery glow
    of the sky

  7. thats a beauty – the winter, the bare tree shed all its leaves!

    shouldn’t it be the other way? full of leaves to cover itself from the cold and it can shed leaves to reduce the summer heat??!! look at us humans – how we cover ourselves during winter and bare ourselves during summer!

    this shows how intolerant and weak we are; opposing nature. but the tree, accepting the nature and no grouses at all against it!

  8. ruhi says:

    @latha vidyaranya:

    Wow…that’s some lovely thinking on your part. :) Never looked at it that way. Totally agree with you.

  9. is shaam ki nazar par hamne rakhe hai kuch sitaare
    is raat ki nami pe jhalak uthenge saare…

    a very beautiful pic!!

  10. ruhi says:

    @Dream Catcher, That’s some lovely poetry :) You seem to be a very creative person.

  11. mind if i use this snap in my hindi blog..i want to dedicate these lines n add some more to this pic..:) obviously courtesy : you :)
    u can check some of my work if u wish i mean hindi one on http://nishabd.wordpress.com

    n thanx for appreciating this..anyways i m totally in awe of ur speed in blog..i mean writing speed..whatever comes i can’t post so frequently…gr88

  12. ruhi says:

    @Dream Catcher, Sure…feel free to use it, but make sure it links back to my blog. Appreciate your asking me. :)

    I tried reading some Hindi poems in your blog, but to tell you the truth, my hindi has deteriorated a great extent… :( So I couldn’t understand much. Besides, reading Hindi in english is a very difficult task to achieve.

  13. ruhi says:

    @Google Crawling,

    Thank you :) You have an unique user ID btw.


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